Sunday Morning! “Pierre and Jean” by Guy de Maupassant
Gaston La Touche, Public domain, via Wikimedia Commons
According to E.M. Forster, the difference between story and plot is this: a story is “The King died and then the Queen died;” while a plot is “The King died and then the Queen died of grief.” The difference, according to Forster, is simply a “sense of causality” that overshadows the sequence of events in time. As he points out, it’s very hard to tell a story that is not a sequence of events in time, although some have tried.
I’ve been reading Forster’s “Aspects of the Novel” because, against my better judgment, I’ve been busy in recent weeks completing the first draft of a novel, as well as working a few part time jobs in NYC. (Friends worried that I wouldn’t find a job here; currently, I have three!) And so, I’ve been thinking about how to get make believe people to do things and make it plausible that they would do those things. I’ve said before that a fictional story is like a terrarium: you make a world and fill it with whatever fits and then stick in characters and see how they interact with that world. Maybe give them a few complications to make things interesting. Hopefully.
You can give characters things to do that are implausible, of course, but it helps a lot if there’s at least some sense of their motivation. And it’s tricky because, as individuals, we often don’t know just what our motivations are. The psychological novel often hinges on people who don’t know why they do the things they do written by an author who knows exactly why they do these things. Now, whether the author will lay their characters’ psyches bare for us is an open question. It seems to me that many American writers follow Ernest Hemingway’s “iceberg theory” in which we only know a little about what’s going on beneath the surface. This can be highly effective: think of Hemingway’s story “The Killers” where we never quite know why the ex-boxer is resigned to his impending death. Hemingway recalled: “That story probably had more left out of it than anything I ever wrote.” It works.
This week I read Guy de Maupassant’s most famous novel “Pierre and Jean,” which doesn’t leave anything to the imagination in terms of what’s going on in the mind of its main character, yet remains compelling. Maupassant was a master of the short story and this one’s simple enough to be a fable: a lower bourgeois family with two competitive brothers, a bored mother, and boring father lives by the sea. One day, they receive word that an old family friend has passed away and left a large inheritance to the son Jean. This, understandably enough, arouses the jealousy of his brother Pierre. However, the pain becomes acute one night in a pub, when a woman of easy virtue comments to Pierre that the two brothers don’t much resemble each other. He starts wondering if his brother really bears any resemblance to his father. Would this explain the inheritance? Was the deceased family friend closer to mom than anyone knew? Before long, Pierre’s obsession compels him, deranges him, and threatens to destroy his family.
She’s bored, bro.
So, on one hand, the story is a twist on the typical tale of sexual obsession: here, it’s the son rather than the husband who is obsessed with the chastity of the wife. The father here is just another in a long line of bourgeois cuckolds in nineteenth century fiction. It’s striking reading the literature of the era how often the theme arises. One gets the impression that, prior to paternity testing, patriarchal civilization was largely centered on minimizing the chances of questionable paternity. Minimizing but not completely eliminating. For the wives, who married young, adultery is often treated as a feeble attempt at breaking the chains of patriarchy that usually ends badly. Maupassant was apparently obsessed with questionable paternity as well.
On the other hand, it’s the larger story of needing to know forbidden knowledge even if it’s ultimately self-destructive, which goes back at least to Prometheus. Western men always need to know, even when they should maybe keep their nose out of it. Pierre feels excluded and shut out, sure, but also questions the nature of his mother and his family, and ultimately his own reality. It’s enough to derange anyone, and Maupassant depicts it all in a tone that is both analytical, detached, and a bit wry. I found myself both amused and slightly horrified reading about this angry young man wrecking his home over something that doesn’t really concern him.
The term for this is “psycho-realism” in fiction; the French excelled at it and Maupassant studied under two of the best: Flaubert and Zola. I am aware in my own writing how often I am inclined to delve into the minutiae of characters’ inner lives and show how messy things are beneath the surface. The iceberg theory has its merits, but most writers who try to sound like Hemingway just sound like blowhards (Including, after a certain point, Hemingway). I’d rather most writers bring on the mess. Let us know how grief killed the Queen!
Now, I gotta get back to work.
And so, what are YOU reading, writing, watching, playing, pondering, or obsessing over this weekend?
I did not like Kiling Commodore when it came out and am giving it a second try.Report
I read a collection of “ghost stories” from Maupassant a few months ago, mostly not about ghosts, possibly should have been described as Poe stories. It was as such collections go somewhat hit and miss, with the first person narrator frequently assuring us that ‘you must think me mad, but hear me out . . .’ The last story, which I think was true both for the book and the author contained this description of his introversion that I liked:
“We are, on earth, two distinct races. Those who have need of others, whom others amuse, engage soothe, whom solitude harasses, pains, stupefies, like the movement of a terrible glacier or the traversing of the desert; and those, on the contrary, whom others weary, tire, bore, silently torture, whom isolation calms and bathes in the repose of independency, and plunges into the humors of their own thoughts. In fine, there is here a normal, physical phenomenon. Some are constituted to live a life outside of themselves, others, to live a life within themselves. As for me, my exterior associations are abruptly and painfully short-lived, and, as they reach their limits, I experience in my whole body and in my whole intelligence an intolerable uneasiness.”
Who Knows?Report
Yeah, Maupassant wrote a LOT of stories considering he started kind of late and died at age 43. He wrote about 300 short stories and a handful of novels and essays. Most of the story collections I’ve read have been a bit hit or miss, but with a few stories among the best I’ve read.Report
I’m reading the U.S.A trilogy by John Dos Passos. One of the interesting and maybe sad things is that the type of modernist novels that played with language and writing because many plots were deemed done have fallen into disfavor. Even literary novelists seem to write in a more uncreative way than writers in the period between 1910 and maybe 1940 did.Report
Not sure if you’re an SF fan, but John Brunner’s Stand on Zanzibar (1968) owes a lot to Dos Passos.Report
If you haven’t read Three Soldiers, Streets of Night, and Manhattan Transfer, I recommend doing so while you’re in a Dos Passos place. You can really see the style of the trilogy developing in those early works, and Three Soldiers remains a must read among war novels.Report